Marohen's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Conversion Calculator]

Hmm...

You forgot:

-Lenge: Yards, centimeters, millimeters
-Weight: this is where it gets confusing. Kilograms are mass and pounds are weight, they are two seperate factors in their own, as your weight changes based on gravity but your mass stays the same at all times. Weight in metric is Newtons and mass in the other is Slugs.

Good work, however! ^^

[Flash RPG Maker v0.1]

It doesn't have potential, it is the avatar of it!

The potential for this kind of game exceeds anything the flash world has seen! The idea of making your own games on something like this is not grand, it's phenominal!

I may be giving you a low mark because it is incomplete, but when it is complete I can't wait!

Here are some ideas for things to add to the full version:

-The ability to change the color of objects(A red/green/blue adjustment feature should do the job).
-Characters are good, but allow the ability to modify certain features of it's appearence.
-Allow the ability for people to create their own weapons and spells.
-But, most importantly, the ability to export it in some way so other people can play it! (I'm no skilled person with action scripting, but perhaps there is some what you can export all the data itself into a seperate .fla file that can then be submitted and played by other people?)

These are only a handful of suggestions, but don't hesitate to finish this piece! You may well be setting the foundation for something truly great here! Not only would you have created something great, but it has the potential to allow others who lack significant actionscripting, animateing, and/or drawing skills the ability to express themselves via flash!

I bow to you, good sir, but make haste, I'm sure there are those who may decide to take the idea and steal it from you before you ever finish, ruining your chance for fame!

[Customer Service]

Ha!

I got the best result on the first try, damn I'm good! ¬.¬ If you want someone to comply with you they have to feel that you are someone they can trust; someone that they naturally guess in disposition, and that guess being a good one.

A clever and thought-provoking piece, well done! ^^

[Drakojan Skies Mission 2]

Professional style.

Very well made, combining sprites and flash grafics in an effective and beautiful manner. The only problem is the lack of completion, I really hope whatever it is your going through that would otherwise prevent you from continuing this piece is remedied in the near future. And I can't wait until you complete it! This takes the expectation of the first level and surpasses it by far.

[Fatal Fred Saves the Day]

Shows potential...

...But still needs alot of work. For starters, try and make the grounds motion loop alittle more fluent.

[The Ambridge Mansion-Day1]

Wow

That is absoulutly impressive, first thing that actually got me alittle scared. I applaud the maker of this for their excellent work.

[Defend Your Computer]

If only in real life it would be this fun...

Excellent in almost every aspect. A applaud you on this wonderful piece.

[Drakojan Skies Mission 1]

Masterpiece.

This goes far beyond my expectations. Spectacular in every aspect.